I like your magazine, and the use of colours, how you have combined the colours read and black together. one thing i disagree is the sub-headings they are small and because you have made the font italic and bold, and it looks like it has been squidge. so just change that :)
The colours used went well together, so the colour scheme was good. The pictures used where off good quality and a range of shots were used, everything was layed out neatly but you had a lot of dead space, which could of been covered up by photos or more text,
Hi Emma, i like that you have used a variety of images for your magazine and made the student working your optical center which shows your main focus is the work of students at plumstead manor however it would be more appropriate to the target audience if more colours were introduced or to have a different variety of font as the font you have used is quite plain
Hey Emma! I like you header as it is bold and would stand out to the audience. I also like that you have used a range of fonts on your front cover which makes it more exciting and interesting to read. You have a great selection of images, I like the medium shot as it's what I am drawn to first. However I would agree with Seada and say that your sub-headings are a little small to read and students may find difficult to read, but an overall good job! :)
I like your magazine, and the use of colours, how you have combined the colours read and black together. one thing i disagree is the sub-headings they are small and because you have made the font italic and bold, and it looks like it has been squidge. so just change that :)
ReplyDeleteThe colours used went well together, so the colour scheme was good. The pictures used where off good quality and a range of shots were used, everything was layed out neatly but you had a lot of dead space, which could of been covered up by photos or more text,
ReplyDeleteHi Emma, i like that you have used a variety of images for your magazine and made the student working your optical center which shows your main focus is the work of students at plumstead manor however it would be more appropriate to the target audience if more colours were introduced or to have a different variety of font as the font you have used is quite plain
ReplyDeleteHey Emma! I like you header as it is bold and would stand out to the audience. I also like that you have used a range of fonts on your front cover which makes it more exciting and interesting to read. You have a great selection of images, I like the medium shot as it's what I am drawn to first. However I would agree with Seada and say that your sub-headings are a little small to read and students may find difficult to read, but an overall good job! :)
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